A few things I think would make this map better, broken down into little phrases:
- Switch the RL and GL placements.
- Where's the Railgun?
- Where's the SSG?
- Where's the Red Armor (or any armor for that matter)?
Other than that, it looks and feels great! Maybe you could add another level to it, like people could take a ladder/jumppad/rocket-jump to the top... Just an idea
IMO, as long as it's fun with good playability for all classes, it belongs in the mappack.